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Phillip O.
** || **Student Reviewer Feedback ** || ||  || Will people use collobarative websites more to make money? How will collaborative documents help companies hire emplyess? || ||  || ||   || ||   ||
 * **Criteria Descriptors
 * **Quality of Content**
 * Does the content (writing) make sense? || Yes but you have to pay close attention. If you tune out you'll lose track of what the article is saying. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || Try making it a little bit more clearer. Like if someone tunes out, they'll be able to get right back on track. ||
 * Pose three questions that arise from your reading || Will colaborative works help hire workers for companies?
 * **Communication**
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || No ||
 * Do they need more? || Definetly ||
 * Are they clear in their messages to each other? || Not really. Only one person is writing in the discussion section ||
 * Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || Nope ||
 * **Collaboration**
 * Does the work appear to be equally shared? || No. Seems like one person is doing all the work. ||
 * Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || No ||
 * **Presentation - Layout and Design**
 * Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || Only 1 image, and not that relevant. ||
 * Recommendations? || Try finding an image that is more relevant. ||

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I have learned from my research that collabarative websites are helping companies work on documents quickly. They also help editing of important documents such as record and information of that sort.

http://www.techcrunch.com/2007/08/08/the-future-of-copyright-protection-is-here-and-it-costs-11-an-hour/ http://www.apple.com/hotnews/thoughtsonmusic/ http://www.mathworks.com/company/aboutus/policies_statements/piracy.html

__//**Topic: History and Sucess Of Nintendo Video Game Entertainment Systems**//__
Video games are one of the world’s most polpular form of entertainment. It started in 1966. with a man named Ralph Baer. HE came up with the ideas that computer games could be played on a tv. These were known as TV Games, and eventually the named changed into video games. The first video game console was known as the Magnavox Odyssey and it was released in 1972. 3 years later, a company known as Nintendo decided to enter the video game revoulution. They bought rights to sell the Odyssey in Japan. For a while, Nintendo focused on arcade games such as Donkey Kong and Super Mario Bros. But then in 1983 released the Nintendo Entertainment System (NES). This started Nintendo success in the video game industry. According to the company history on the Nintendo website, the NES was extremely successful, selling over 60 million consoles in it’s lifespan. The NES was also the birthplace for many of Nintendo’s top selling franchises: the Mario series, the legend of Zelda series, and the metroid series just to name a few. The NES used an 8-bit chip to power the audio and video of a video game. The console was very successful. Then in

__//**Bibliography**//__

1. Kuchera, Ben. "November Game Sales up 52% versus 2006. Nintendo rules the roost." 14 Dec 2007 11 Feb 2008 <[|http://arstechnica.com/news.ars/post/20071214-november-game-sales-up-52-vs-2006-nintendo-rules-the-roost.html>.]

This article contains the sales report for the month of november of 2007 for the three major companies in the video game industry: Sony, Microsoft, and Nintendo. Accoring to this article Nintendo was head at sales at that time. This can help show me how nintendo has been leading the pack in terms of video game sales.

2.http://www.videogamecharts.com/index.html

3.http://www.nintendo.com/corp/history.jsp

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